Can you spot what’s wrong in the image below? Please post your answer as a comment.
I post these challenges to raise awareness of the importance of proofreading.
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Susan Weiner, CFA
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Susan Weiner, CFA2018-04-16 05:30:072018-03-07 16:48:12MISTAKE MONDAY for April 16: Can YOU spot what’s wrong?
inquiries
Thanks for your participation, Andy!
As Andy pointed out, the text should use “inquiries” instead of “inquires.” I think that’s the mistake that drew my eye to this week’s Mistake Monday item.
Some other issues:
* “High quality” with quotation marks suggests the inquiries are not really high quality.
* The second sentence needs a period.
* Random capitalization